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Besoin d'aide me dire quel texte est le mieux, le plus approfondi et celui ou il y a le meilleur anglais c'est noté !! Et me corriger les fautes si il y en a merci d'avance !

TEXTE 1
Unfortunately, brands are expensive and everybody can't afford it. But I still love shopping and buy clothes.My tips to buy brand clothes are : waiting for sales and have a look on the web. On internet, it's very often cheaper than in stores. To me, it"s important to be well dressed , it makes you good looking, someone who takes care of himself (ou herself). When you weat brands, you feel more comfortable and you don't take care of what people think (people eyes, people judgement)

TEXTE 2
Unfortunately the famous brands are expensiveand not everyone cannot carry some. But I adorelike same making shopping and buying clothes tome. My tips to buy business of less expensivebrands are: to expect the balances, to look ondifferent website… Indeed often in stores thearticles are more expensive than on Internet. Forme it is necessary more or less to get dressed because that presents a good image of us, a person who takes care of it. When one carries brands oneis more at ease and one is not worried by glance of people.

TEXTE 3
Unfortunately the big brands are expensive and not everyone can wear . But even as I love shopping and buy some clothes.
My tips for buying a business cheaper brands are : to wait for the sales , look on various website ... Indeed often store items are more expensive than online.
For me it is necessary to dress more or less as it has a good image of us , a person who takes care of her.
When bears marks one is more comfortable and does not care for the look of the people.

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